Showing posts with label #Haiku. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #Haiku. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 5, 2018

Focal Point.....

Haiku #071



















Focal Point.....

Reminiscent memories
Revealing cosmic stories
From a lost forgotten world ....

Friday, May 6, 2016

Life is.....

Haiku# 070














Life is.....

but a lovely game

Science, philosophy, history
are all it's varied names!!

Thursday, September 10, 2015

Veracity….




Haiku #069
Veracity….
Lucid dreams and reality
Coexist secretly in our daydreams
Till we learn to have faith in!



Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Haiku # 066
Pathway…
Progressive steps
Conduit through convection

Released doors of opportunities!


Thursday, February 20, 2014

Engraved….

Haiku # 065
Engraved….
Living infinite memories
an innocent child 
graciously buried in stone !


Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Sandstorm…

Haiku #064
Sandstorm…
Reality - dreams
Contrasting merging extremes
Causing turmoil's within!




Certainty…

Haiku # 063
Certainty…
Endorsed dreams destinies
Death certain eventuality

Life seems infinity!


Courage…

Haiku #062
Courage…
Take the plunge leap…
Infinite possibility

Mending broken ways!


Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Creativity….

Haiku #061
Creativity….
Shrouded beneath dark, self
Ripples in my brain-

causes poetry!!



Persistent…

Haiku # 060
Persistent…
Seed’s capacity to succeed,
deadly summer breeze
Life in an abandoned shell !!



Monday, September 16, 2013

Death Grip…

Haiku # 059
Death Grip
Lined colored deices, choices
human power play- world
giant political chess game!!




Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Footprints….

Haiku # 058
Footprints….
Left behind footprints
made inevitably, living

destined Journey my life!!



Teardrop…

Haiku # 057
Teardrop…
Nature's shiny- tear drop
courageous dreams, exploring

dangerous territory!



Monday, July 8, 2013

Writer’s aide..

Haiku # 056
Writer’s aide..
Carving dreams merging
emotional deep extremes

writers writing pen !



Freedom…

Haiku # 055
Freedom
Aided glide human flight
feeling bird like paradise
Glider’s view of life!

Image from the net.

Monday, July 1, 2013

Troiku Style 1 - One sleigh and 3 horses

Haiku # 054
Sapling’s novel beginning……


Immolated seed
emerging source’s life in spring
nature's prodigy!!














Immolated seed
Novel gentle beginning
conquered cogent land!

emerging source's life in spring
astounding beauty
slowly spreading wings!

nature's prodigy
unique new phase, marvelous
life's emerging way's!!



TROIKU, A new form of haiku

Here is a writing technique which is really modern and very new!
In my opinion, it captures the essence of  Haiku and blends regular poetic form, the technique is Haiku and the feel is poetic. The effect is magical, I loved it truly.

This post is written for a prompt from Carpe Demi. Really interesting technique.
and is the original idea of +Kristjaan Panneman !
My understanding of this style and a brief from what I read!
The word Troika typically menace a triplet, its origin is Russian meaning a horse chariot with three horses!


The basic technique is to have a base Haiku, this is our sleigh which is further connected to three Haiku's or three horses of our Haiku chariot connected in a symmetry.

The first line of our sleigh haiku will be the first line of our first horse, the second line of our sleigh will be the first line of second horse and the last line of sleigh haiku will be the first line of our third horse.

I have followed the traditional rule of 5-7-5, my blend to this technique.
Since it's a Troika meaning a horse chariot with three horses it cannot be 5-7-5 through out.


Sleigh is 5-7-5 syllables, Horse 1 is 5-7-5, Horse 2 is 7-5-5 and Horse 3 is 5-7-5

The other option or Style 2 could be with 2 Base Haiku's or sleighs with 6 connecting Horses, here is how it would look graphically.


I will be posting a style 2 Troika next!
This is really amazing, not very easy but a positive challenge to create something different.

Option 3 or Style 3 would be the toughest to write with 3 Base Haiku's and 9 connecting horses. Here is how it would look graphically.


The challenge is to find a way to connect the three sleighs logically and to also create a symmetry between the 9 horses. A truly difficult composition!

Sunday, June 30, 2013

Entwined sea- sky..........

Haiku # 053
Entwined sea- sky..........
Merging meeting effortlessly
contrasting extremes high and deep
Mocking, otiosity of boundaries!


Crucified…

Haiku # 052
Crucified…
Crippled statue of humanity
Watching helplessly

Otiosity of narcissistic deeds!


Dry Leaves….

Haiku 051
Dry Leaves….
Wayfarer's delectation
Autumn near twilight

Ending traveler's privation!