Haiku #064
Sandstorm…
Reality - dreams
Contrasting merging extremes
Causing turmoil's within!
Tuesday, December 17, 2013
Certainty…
Haiku # 063
Certainty…
Endorsed dreams destinies
Death certain eventuality
Life seems infinity!
Tuesday, September 17, 2013
Creativity….
Haiku #061
Creativity….
Shrouded
beneath dark, self
Ripples in my brain-
causes
poetry!!
Persistent…
Haiku # 060
Persistent…
Seed’s capacity to succeed,
deadly summer breeze
Life in an abandoned shell !!
Monday, September 16, 2013
Death Grip…
Haiku # 059
Death
Grip…
Lined colored deices,
choices
human power play- world
giant political chess
game!!
Tuesday, July 16, 2013
Footprints….
Haiku # 058
Footprints….
Left behind footprints
made inevitably, living
destined
Journey my life!!
Teardrop…
Haiku # 057
Teardrop…
Nature's shiny- tear drop
courageous dreams, exploring
dangerous territory!
Monday, July 8, 2013
Writer’s aide..
Haiku #
056
Writer’s aide..
Carving dreams merging
emotional deep extremes
writers writing pen !
Freedom…
Haiku # 055
Freedom…
Aided glide human flight
feeling bird like paradise
Glider’s
view of life! |
| Image from the net. |
Monday, July 1, 2013
Troiku Style 1 - One sleigh and 3 horses
Haiku # 054
Sapling’s novel
beginning……
Immolated seed
emerging source’s life in spring
nature's prodigy!!
Immolated seed
Novel gentle beginning
conquered cogent land!
emerging source's life in spring
astounding beauty
slowly spreading wings!
nature's prodigy
unique new phase, marvelous
life's emerging way's!!
TROIKU, A new form of haiku
Here is a writing technique which is really modern and very new!
In my opinion, it captures the essence of Haiku and blends regular poetic form, the technique is Haiku and the feel is poetic. The effect is magical, I loved it truly.
This post is written for a prompt from Carpe Demi. Really interesting technique.
and is the original idea of +Kristjaan Panneman !
My understanding of this style and a brief from what I read!
The word Troika typically menace a triplet, its origin is Russian meaning a horse chariot with three horses!
The basic technique is to have a base Haiku, this is our sleigh which is further connected to three Haiku's or three horses of our Haiku chariot connected in a symmetry.
The first line of our sleigh haiku will be the first line of our first horse, the second line of our sleigh will be the first line of second horse and the last line of sleigh haiku will be the first line of our third horse.
I have followed the traditional rule of 5-7-5, my blend to this technique.
Since it's a Troika meaning a horse chariot with three horses it cannot be 5-7-5 through out.
Sleigh is 5-7-5 syllables, Horse 1 is 5-7-5, Horse 2 is 7-5-5 and Horse 3 is 5-7-5
The other option or Style 2 could be with 2 Base Haiku's or sleighs with 6 connecting Horses, here is how it would look graphically.
I will be posting a style 2 Troika next!
This is really amazing, not very easy but a positive challenge to create something different.
Option 3 or Style 3 would be the toughest to write with 3 Base Haiku's and 9 connecting horses. Here is how it would look graphically.
The challenge is to find a way to connect the three sleighs logically and to also create a symmetry between the 9 horses. A truly difficult composition!
In my opinion, it captures the essence of Haiku and blends regular poetic form, the technique is Haiku and the feel is poetic. The effect is magical, I loved it truly.
This post is written for a prompt from Carpe Demi. Really interesting technique.
and is the original idea of +Kristjaan Panneman !
My understanding of this style and a brief from what I read!
The word Troika typically menace a triplet, its origin is Russian meaning a horse chariot with three horses!
The basic technique is to have a base Haiku, this is our sleigh which is further connected to three Haiku's or three horses of our Haiku chariot connected in a symmetry.
The first line of our sleigh haiku will be the first line of our first horse, the second line of our sleigh will be the first line of second horse and the last line of sleigh haiku will be the first line of our third horse.
I have followed the traditional rule of 5-7-5, my blend to this technique.
Since it's a Troika meaning a horse chariot with three horses it cannot be 5-7-5 through out.
Sleigh is 5-7-5 syllables, Horse 1 is 5-7-5, Horse 2 is 7-5-5 and Horse 3 is 5-7-5
The other option or Style 2 could be with 2 Base Haiku's or sleighs with 6 connecting Horses, here is how it would look graphically.
I will be posting a style 2 Troika next!
This is really amazing, not very easy but a positive challenge to create something different.
Option 3 or Style 3 would be the toughest to write with 3 Base Haiku's and 9 connecting horses. Here is how it would look graphically.
The challenge is to find a way to connect the three sleighs logically and to also create a symmetry between the 9 horses. A truly difficult composition!
Sunday, June 30, 2013
Entwined sea- sky..........
Haiku # 053
Entwined sea- sky..........
Merging meeting effortlessly
contrasting extremes high and deep
Mocking, otiosity of
boundaries!
Crucified…
Haiku
# 052
Crucified…
Crippled statue of humanity
Watching helplessly
Otiosity of
narcissistic deeds!
Dry Leaves….
Haiku 051
Dry Leaves….
Wayfarer's delectation
Autumn near twilight
Ending traveler's privation!
Autumn…
Haiku #050
Autumn…
Lost
bleary old house
silent
wind’s whispering,
approaching season’s change !
Wednesday, June 26, 2013
Human mind………..
Human mind………..
Bright
light sheltered positivity
dark side co-exists secretly
beneath watery melting mind !!
dark side co-exists secretly
beneath watery melting mind !!
Thursday, June 20, 2013
Life’s Climax….
Haiku # 048
Life’s
Climax….
Time- certain
destiny
Singing eternally, cuckoo
nature's unsung song !
Saturday, June 15, 2013
Purposeful existence…
Haiku # 044
Purposeful
existence…
Append life worn out
blue glory proffering beauty
giving naturally!
Tan Renga Challenge 'a secret meeting'.....
Haiku # 043
Tan Ranga- Secret Meeting.....
 |
| Image from www.fujiarts.com |
In the old barn
behind the straw bales
a secret meeting
By: Kristjaan Panneman
A secret meeting
eternal copulating
reaching soul- final meaning!
By: Bhawana Bhowmik
Friday, June 14, 2013
Painted lady- Butterfly….
Haiku # 040
Painted
lady- Butterfly….
Painted lady, flies
allured by blue iris
honeysuckle life!
Thursday, June 13, 2013
Paternity…
Haiku # 036
Paternity…
Wild giant mammoths
innocent apprehensive
walking peacefully!
Size so deceiving
displaying fake sets of teeth
seeking palisade!
Hidden beneath strength
is the need captivating
binding family!!
Tuesday, June 11, 2013
Serenity…
Haiku #
034
Serenity…
Shrouded parallel paths, tasks
Still
water spirituality
contrast
Free human will!!
Free human will!!
Secret Emergence…..
Haiku # 033
Secret Emergence…..
No source visible,
the mystery emergence
gaining wisdom is magical !!
Embrace….
Haiku # 032
Embrace….
Endless path life
Tired feet and mind
Nature providing shade, embrace!!
Monday, June 10, 2013
Wilderly…..
Haiku # 031
Wilderly…..
Wild is better in
wilderness, civility
doomed society!
suicidal minds
Suffering souls, secretly
real society!
Stratum's well defined
Condemned pride, morality
forged integrity!
Wild is not wildly
Chasing material gains
rebellious wish dreams!
Our greed catalyzed
Civilized society
untamed beast ghostly!
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